The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of unemployed individuals aged from 15 to 24 in Poland, Italy, Hungary, Germany, and Denmark in 2005. Units measured by
percentage
.
Overall
, the percentage
of unemployed young people
was higher than overall
unempolyment
in all countries. There was a significant difference in the Correct your spelling
unemployment
employment
percentage
of the Poland people
.
In Poland, the percentage
of unemployed young people
was a
two times more than Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
overall
unemployment about 35% to 15%. Italy had 20% for
young Change preposition
of
people
to under 10% for
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apply
overall
. Hungary had a similar percentage
for overall
unemployment while
the young people
had just above 15%.
In Germany
there was not a big difference between the two groups the Add a comma
Germany,
percentage
of unemployed people
aged 15 to 24 about
15% ,Add a missing verb
was about
while
the other group was just 10%. Denmark had the lowest percentage
of unemployment for both groups, the
amount of unemployed young Change preposition
with the
people
about
6% Change preposition
at about
while
other groups under
5%.Add a missing verb
were under
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