The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram illustrates a way of shaping
glass
containers.
Overall
, the process of shaping glass
has nine phases. It is started by put
Wrong verb form
putting
glass
in machine
Add an article
the machine
a machine
with
a high temperature , Change preposition
at
then
use
different container moulds to shape the Wrong verb form
using
glass
,then
cooling it before is checked by a staff.Correct word choice
and then
Finally
, there are two boxes one for the packging
and the other for waste.
First five phases, Correct your spelling
packaging
glass
is put in Correct article usage
the glass
hot
machine with 105 Furnance, Correct article usage
a hot
then
the hot glass
put
in Add a missing verb
is put
mould
1, Add an article
the mould
after
that, it is pressed by a specific tool. Correct word choice
and after
In addition
, that container with a thick wall is put in mould 2 to shape the glass
and makes
space for the air's movement.
In the Correct subject-verb agreement
make
last
four stages, after glass
is shaped, it is heated with 482 Add an article
the glass
Kiln
.Fix the agreement mistake
Kilns
Then
, it is put for cooling with
25 Change preposition
at
degree
for 60 minutes. After that, a staff ensure it is well Change to a plural noun
degrees
shaping
, Wrong verb form
shaped
then
the Correct word choice
and then
last
stage they put it on
Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
a packging
packging
box or waste box.Correct your spelling
packaging
packing
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