WRITING TASK 1 This graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph tells the cities’ population
percentage
in four Asian Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
countries
including the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020 and forecasts for 2030 and 2040. Out of four countries
, Malaysia and Indonesia had facing
the same trends. These nation’s cities’ Wrong verb form
faced
population
faced gradual increased
throughout the year starting from 30% and 10% Replace the word
increases
respecitvely
and forecasted 80% and 40% Correct your spelling
respectively
for
the nation’s Change preposition
of
population
will stay in the city in 2040. Different from those countries
, the Philippines metropolitan’s citizens fluctuate from year to year especially from 1970 to 2010, but different trends will be occurred
from 2020 to 2040 which Wrong verb form
occur
country’s
Correct article usage
the country’s
population
will starting
to Change the verb form
start
be starting
gain
to more than twice of first year’s Verb problem
grow
population
. Following three other countries
, Thailand faced a stagnant slope of population
starting from 19%, hence
, it eventually uphill starting from 2020 and based on the forecast it will have a significant increase in the next 20 years to 35%Submitted by rkarinameu on
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