The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The given diagrams depict the proportions of
men
and
women
aged 60-64 remaining in the workforce in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, there was a noticeable decline in
employment
rates
among both
men
and
women
in
this
age group over the thirty-year period. In both 1970 and 2000, the percentage of
men
aged 60-64 who were still working exceeded that of
women
in the same age bracket. Specifically, Japanese
men
had the highest
employment
rates
, with 85% still holding jobs in 1970, followed by
Belgium
, Australia, and the USA with 79%, 76%, and 73% respectively.
However
, by 2000, there was a significant decrease in these figures, particularly evident in
Japan
, where the percentage dropped to 19%.
Similarly
, the USA,
Japan
, and Australia experienced declines to 55%, 74%, and 47% respectively during the same period. Turning to female
employment
rates
, Japanese
women
had the highest proportion still employed in 1970, at 43%,
while
Belgium
had the lowest, with only 8%. By 2000, despite a slight increase in the USA and Australia, both
Japan
and
Belgium
saw decreases in female
employment
rates
, with
Japan
at 40% and
Belgium
at 7%.
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