The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph depicts data about the proportion of visitors to four different
tourtist
attractions in Brighton, a city Correct your spelling
tourist
of
England over a 30-year period.
At first glance, it is visible that almost Change preposition
in
places
experienced an upward trend with the exception of Correct determiner usage
all places
art
gallery
and Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
Pier
. Notably, Fix the agreement mistake
Piers
Art
gallery
had the most significant change among all categories,
Looking at Festival
, in 1980, it had Correct article usage
the Festival
outnumbered
figure with Correct article usage
an outnumbered
aroung
30 Correct your spelling
around
percentage
of visitors to Replace the word
per cent
this
place, but it almost had no clear difference between 2010 and 1980, their numbers are 30% and 28% respectively. Furthermore
, regarding the second-highest figure, the Pavilion, it had approximately under 25% in 1980 but went up incredibly to the peak of roughly 48% in 1995 prior to decreasing by 15% in 2010.
On the other hand
, the visitor numbers in Art
Correct article usage
the Art
gallery
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galleries
it
went up and down to reach 20% by 1990 before undergoing a drop of around 12% in 2010Correct pronoun usage
apply
,
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apply
and
being the lowest figure. Correct word choice
apply
Finally
, nearly 10% visitors
entered Change preposition
of visitors
pier
in 1980 and it Correct article usage
the pier
start
a modest fluctuation, surpassing Wrong verb form
started
art
Correct article usage
the art
gallery
at 15% in 2005 and Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
reach
over 20% by 2010.Wrong verb form
reaching
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Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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