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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts provide data on the percentages of
water
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 which is utilized for several objectives in six nations. It is apparent that the majority of
water
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 is used for agriculture in most of the countries,
while
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 the percentage of
water
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 for domestic
use
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 is the lowest compared to the other.
According to
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 the graph, the figure for agriculture
use
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 is highest in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia, and South America, accounting for 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71% respectively.
While
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 the number of
agriculture
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agricultural
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use
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 is the second highest in North America and Europe, the percentage of industrial
use
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 is the biggest in those areas, representing 48% and 53% respectively. The proportion of domestic
use
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 is larger than industrial
use
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 in South America, Africa, and Central Asia by 9%, 2%, and 2% respectively. Meanwhile, the amount of
water
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 in industrial
use
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 is more than domestic
use
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 in the remaining region

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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