The graphs below show the number of enrolments into three higher education faculties in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the number of enrolments into three higher education faculties in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data show how many people enrolled
into
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three UK higher education faculties over a period of 4 decades. The data cover the faculties of Sciences, Arts ,and Business. 
Overall
, enrolment in the three faculties has risen, and more
men
than
women
have taken up study. In 1980, Arts was the only faculty that enrolled more
women
than
men
, at around 300
thousand
, exceeding
men
by a ratio of 2:1.
However
, by 2010 over 600
thousand
men
had enrolled, surpassing
women
by around a third.
By contrast
, Sciences enrolled more
men
in the 1980s, but by 2010 was the only sector with more
women
than
men
in its cohort; the number of
men
rose steadily from around 210
thousand
to just below 700
thousand
. Whilst the number of
women
remained relatively stable through
to
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the early 1990s, there was
then
a steep increase which saw
women
marginally exceed
men
by 2010. The Faculty of Business saw the most fluctuation. Around 100
thousand
women
entered at the beginning of the period,
together with
around 250
thousand
men
. By 2010 there had been a
three fold
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increase in
women
registrants, and male entry had risen to around 460
thousand
.
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