The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the change in the
percentage
of total
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the total
population
in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with future
predictions
for 20230 and 2040. These four Asian countries are the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia.
The Philippines, which had the highest percentage
of population
in 1970 slightly above 30%, had shown a rise
in the percentage
of the population
from 1980 to 1990 after a calm period from 1970 to 1980. After that, the percentage
of the population
noticed a significant drop reaching its lowest percentage
in 2010. Then
, the population
percentage
noticed a steady rise
with future
predictions
of a continuous increase in the population
percentage
in 2030 and 2040.
Malaysia, which had the second highest percentage
of the population
in 1970, noticed an increase in the percentage
of the population
from 1970 to 1980. Then
, it had a calm period from 1980 to 1990, before having a continuous rise
with future
predictions
of continuous
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a continuous
rise
in 2030 and 2040.
Thailand, which had the third position in terms of percentage
of population
in 1970, noticed a continuous rise
from 1970 to 1990 before having a slight drop from 1990 to 2010. After that, the country had a continuous increase in the population
with future
predictions
of continuous rise
.
Indonesia, which had the lowest population
percentage
in 1970, had a continuous rise
in the percentage
of the population
with future
predictions
of a continuous rise
.
In Summary, The Philippines had the highest population
in 1970 while
Malaysia has the future
predictions
of the highest population
percentage
by 2040.Submitted by fahadajl64 on
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