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The line graph gives information about the average number of people visiting a museum in two seasons: summer and winter in the UK of the year 2003.

The line graph gives information about the average number of people visiting a museum in two seasons: summer and winter in the UK of the year 2003.
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The line graph gives information about the average
number
 of
people
 visiting a museum in two seasons: summer and winter in the UK
of
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 the year 2003. In general, it can be clearly seen that there was a significant difference between
number
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the number
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visitors
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of visitors
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 in
two
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the two
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 seasons, with summer attracting more
people
 than
that
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apply
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in winter. Regarding the summer, at 9:00 there were over 200
people
 visiting the museum,
then
this
 figure rose considerably and reached its peak of approximately 1500 at around 12:30. In the rest of the day, the
number
 of
people
 paying a visit to the museum witnessed a decline and by 17:00 the
number
 decreased to 200. Afterwards, there were no visitors after 17:00. When it comes to the winter, at 9:00 the figure was 200 and gradually increased to over 500 after 30 minutes.
Then
, there were some fluctuations and reaching its peak of 60 visitors at 12:00 before experiencing a sharp decline to 0 after 14:30.
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