The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given bar charts data
invole
the number of students learning computer science Correct your spelling
involve
of
united Change preposition
at
king dom
from 2010 to 2012.
Correct your spelling
kingdom
Overall
, on
2012,2011 and 2012, Change preposition
in
bristish
home students Correct your spelling
British
increaes
from 43 to 45 by boy people,Correct your spelling
increases
increase
increased
However
,the
oversea student Correct article usage
apply
are
elite between 2010 and 2012 from 31 to 45 Change the verb form
is
by
Change preposition
apply
girl
.
Fix the agreement mistake
girls
According to
the data, on
2010 Change preposition
in
genteman
of Correct your spelling
gentleman
gentlemen
bristish
home Correct your spelling
British
student
there was Fix the agreement mistake
students
grow
Wrong verb form
grew
up
40 people,Change preposition
to
however
,on
2011,there Change preposition
in
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
decreased
dramatically Replace the word
decrease
around
24 people.Change preposition
by around
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