In many countires there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. what measures could be taken to prevent this.

In many countries, Industry and construction
has
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become a primary reason
of
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declining
air
and
water
quality
. Many believe that treating the released
air
and
water
waste can make a significant change in these countries.
This
essay will discuss the countermeasures these countries can take to overcome
this
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declining
air
and
water
qualities with reasoned examples.
Firstly
, the
air
and
water
quality
declines
due to
the untreated fumes and chemicals in
environment
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the environment
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. Changing environmental policy
to force
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these companies to follow and regulate their chemical waste release.
For instance
, in India, after 2014s laws change shows a
stagering
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staggering
37% change in
air
&
water
quality
.
Thus
, making it an effective countermeasure.
Secondly
, many
industry
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industries
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lacks
the
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knowledge of their industrial detrimental effects on
environment
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the environment
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, which could
be
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easily subside by spreading awareness.
This
path leads to
company
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the company
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releasing the effect and
provide
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them
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to find alternative options.
Moreover
, there are plenty of counteractive inventions available in the market that can remove the
chemical
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chemicals
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present using
the
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apply
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biodegradable options. In conclusion, the declining
quality
in
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of
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air
&
water
can
be reduce
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be reduced
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with a significant percentage just by applying new policies, initiating awareness campaigns and using
biodegredable
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biodegradable
alternatives to treat the pollutants.
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