The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph depicts the population who consumed three spreads consisting of margarine, Low fat & reduced spreads, and butter per
person
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in
grams
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between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the daily consumption of margarine and butter decreased over the period,
while
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people that consumed low fat & reduced spreads began in 1996, and increased through the year 2007.
To begin
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with, the population in the country that ate Margarine per
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was merely 95
grams
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in 1981,
then
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fluctuated until 1996, and gradually declined until 2007 to 40
grams
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.
Furthermore
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, the consumption of Butter per
person
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per day was 140
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in 1981
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and jumped to 160 in the next 5 years. After that, it was dramatically reduced by approximately 50
grams
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in 2007.
On the other hand
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, the consumption of low fat & reduced spreads in 1
person
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per day began at 10
grams
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in 1996 and significantly increased to 80
grams
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in 2001.
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, in the next 6 years, it slightly dropped to 70
grams
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words person, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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