The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
who travelled to four tourist spots(Art
Gallery
, Pavillion
, Pier
and Festival) over the period of 20 years
.
Overall
, It is clear that
the majority of tourists visited the Pavillion
over the given period, while
the visitors
to the Pier
and the Art
Gallery
were lower.
In 1980, the Festival site had nearly one-third of the visitors
, while
the figures for the Art
Gallery
, Pavillion
, and Pier
were lower at
nearly 25%, over 20%, and just above 10%, respectively. Between the years
1980 to 1985, the figures for the Art
Gallery
and Pier
rose steadily by nearly 5% and almost 18%, respectively. In 1985, the proportion of visitors
exploring the Pavillion
rose significantly over the following years
, reaching its peak at nearly 45% in 1995.
On the other hand
, The Pier
and Art
Gallery
had considerably fewer visitors
throughout the years
. From 1990 to 2005, the number of visitors
to Art
Correct article usage
the Art
Gallery
declined gradually, while
the figure rose steadily for the Pier
. In 2005, it surpassed the Art
Gallery
by a margin of 10% increase in tourists.Submitted by shahroz99dev on
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