The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
who travelled to four tourist spots(Use synonyms
Art
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Gallery
, Use synonyms
Pavillion
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Pier
and Festival) over the period of 20 Use synonyms
years
.
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Overall
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It is clear that
the majority of tourists visited the Linking Words
Pavillion
over the given period, Use synonyms
while
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visitors
to the Use synonyms
Pier
and the Use synonyms
Art
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Gallery
were lower.
In 1980, the Festival site had nearly one-third of the Use synonyms
visitors
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while
the figures for the Linking Words
Art
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Gallery
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Pavillion
, and Use synonyms
Pier
were lower at
nearly 25%, over 20%, and just above 10%, respectively. Between the Use synonyms
years
1980 to 1985, the figures for the Use synonyms
Art
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Gallery
and Use synonyms
Pier
rose steadily by nearly 5% and almost 18%, respectively. In 1985, the proportion of Use synonyms
visitors
exploring the Use synonyms
Pavillion
rose significantly over the following Use synonyms
years
, reaching its peak at nearly 45% in 1995.
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On the other hand
, The Linking Words
Pier
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Art
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Gallery
had considerably fewer Use synonyms
visitors
throughout the Use synonyms
years
. From 1990 to 2005, the number of Use synonyms
visitors
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Art
Correct article usage
the Art
Gallery
declined gradually, Use synonyms
while
the figure rose steadily for the Linking Words
Pier
. In 2005, it surpassed the Use synonyms
Art
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Gallery
by a margin of 10% increase in tourists.Use synonyms
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