The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following line graph illustrates the proportion of
visitors
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who travelled to four tourist spots(
Art
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Gallery
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,
Pavillion
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,
Pier
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and Festival) over the period of 20
years
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.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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the majority of tourists visited the
Pavillion
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over the given period,
while
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the
visitors
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to the
Pier
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and the
Art
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Gallery
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were lower. In 1980, the Festival site had nearly one-third of the
visitors
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,
while
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the figures for the
Art
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Gallery
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,
Pavillion
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, and
Pier
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were lower at nearly 25%, over 20%, and just above 10%, respectively. Between the
years
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1980 to 1985, the figures for the
Art
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Gallery
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and
Pier
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rose steadily by nearly 5% and almost 18%, respectively. In 1985, the proportion of
visitors
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exploring the
Pavillion
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rose significantly over the following
years
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, reaching its peak at nearly 45% in 1995.
On the other hand
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, The
Pier
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and
Art
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Gallery
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had considerably fewer
visitors
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throughout the
years
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. From 1990 to 2005, the number of
visitors
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to
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Art
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the Art
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Gallery
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declined gradually,
while
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the figure rose steadily for the
Pier
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. In 2005, it surpassed the
Art
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Gallery
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by a margin of 10% increase in tourists.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, art, gallery, pavillion, pier, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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