In the future, people may no longer be able to pay things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Some

expert

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once stated that in the

future

cash

will not be used

for

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pay things, all

payment

transactions

would

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require

phone

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or card.

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in the

future

and how will

human

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react

into

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this

. With all the merchants and shops

require

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cashless

payment

through QR, bank transfer, or swiping card,

cash

money

has become more vulnerable to find. Not only

cashless

is convenient compared to

cash

payment

,

cashless

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but cashless

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transaction

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would prevent people

to bring

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from bringing

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a

lot

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amount of

money

inside their

wallet

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wallets

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,

thus

ensure

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their safety from thievery. The merchants

also

find

cashless

payment

more favourable. All transactions made by bank or card would automatically create the digital history on their merchant's account.

Therefore

, the cost and budget analysis for their shops would be more practical and

fast

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. With

this

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conveniences, it is safe to assume that in the

not so distant

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future

cash

payment

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payments

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would

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will

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not be accepted anymore. Considering the

benefit

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benefits

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of

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apply

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cashless

bring

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to either the buyers or the sellers, people will feel

cashless

payment

more

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gratifying than

cash

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the cash

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payment

method.

In addition

to its practical value, doing

cashless

transaction

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would be

more safe

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and people will feel more enjoyable when

traveling

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travelling

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far away without bringing a hefty number

money

. In conclusion,

cashless

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payment

method will likely replace the

cash

payment

method in the

future

. Not only it is convenient for the consumers, but it is prone for the shops to do their financial performance. To add up,

cash

money

that

brought

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to

payment

will make the traveller not safe during their travel,

hence

cashless

transaction

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transactions

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can be a solution.