the graphs below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

the graphs below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant
The graph provides data
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a report from 2008 about the
USA
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use of energy since 1980 with future predictions until 2030.
Overall
, the consumption of all sources has increased except hydropower which is projected to remain relatively stable. Petrol and oil started the time as the highest source that used energy with 35 quadrillion
units
, and it rose gradually year on year with
projection
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to reach nearly 42 quadrillion
units
in 2030. Natural gas and coal began at 20 and nearly 16
units
and despite some fluctuations, there will be a significant increase in coal to approximately 30
units
while
natural gas is predicted to stay the same after its slight growth. Even though nuclear, solar and hydropower consumed the same amount of energy in 1980, nuclear and solar will increase their use of power to nearly 8 and 5 quadrillion
units
respectively.
However
; hydropower will remain at the same level of consumption over the period.
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