The line graph portrays the average figure of American people who visit a museum at a certain time in two seasons such as summer and winter in 2003.

The line graph portrays the average figure of American people who visit a museum at a certain time in two seasons such as summer and winter in 2003.
The line graph portrays the average figure of American people who visit a museum at a certain time in two seasons
such
as summer and winter in 2003.
Overall
, the graph shows that the number of
visitors
in summer was consistently significantly higher than that of winter throughout the period. Looking at the line graph, in summer, in 2003,
this
was the best season to visit the museum in the UK so it had a large number of
visitors
. The
rocketed
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in
visitors
in the UK peaked at approximately 1500 from 0 am to 11:30 am. After that, the figure of
visitors
gradually reduced in the evening to 1190 at 13:30 pm and 800 at 15:30 pm.
Lastly
, the American participants who visited the museum went home from
this
period to close time. In winter, there were many fluctuations in
this
season, especially from 9:30 am to 11:30 am, the figure of
visitors
went up at 500 and went down at 450 and still that until it reached 600. From that,
visitors
gradually decreased to close at 14:30 pm.
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