The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate the information of consumption food by adults in four main meals through 24 hours, and the proportion of three
category
of nutrients which are sodium, saturated fat and added Change to a plural noun
categories
sugar
.
As an initial overview, the lowest percentage is in breakfast with 13% - 16% and all of the elements with less different. Not only is this
point clear, but also
in lunch the percentage of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar
do not have high difference and all of them around 20% - 30%.
A more details look at the charts reveals that dinner has the lowest ratio in
added Change preposition
of
sugar
by just 19%, whereas
it records 42% in sodium and 39% in saturated fat. In contrast
, snacks have the highest proportion of added sugar
with 45%, however
, have tiny
ratio of other nutrients Add an article
a tiny
as
around 15% and 19%
Change preposition
apply
Finally
, the most significant meal is breakfast, but we can note that adults do not care about this
meal, moreover
their snacks are unhealthy Add a comma
moreover,
bacause
amount of Correct your spelling
because
sugar
in it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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