The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The chart illustrates the value of a country's
exports
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across five categories in 2015 and 2016,
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the table shows the percentage change in each category's export values from 2015 to 2016. In 2015, Petroleum products accounted for the highest export category, nearing $61
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, which increased by 3% in 2016. Engineered goods followed closely, with
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just above $58
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,
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seeing a 3% increase in 2016. Gems and jewellery had
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around $43
billion
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in 2015, but experienced a 5.18% decline in 2016, dropping slightly in value. Agricultural products'
exports
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were just over $30
billion
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in 2015, increasing marginally by 0.81% in 2016. Textiles, the smallest category, had
exports
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of around $25
billion
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in 2015 but showed a significant growth of 15.24% in 2016. In summary,
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most export categories saw
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growth between 2015 and 2016, gems and jewellery experienced a decline, and
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the most notable increase was in textiles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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