In today's world,
increasing
number of Add an article
an increasing
people
Use synonyms
work
away from their Use synonyms
families
and Use synonyms
friends
. I believe that Use synonyms
this
situation has benefits and handicaps because their relationships with their relatives and Linking Words
friends
might Use synonyms
affect
Wrong verb form
be affected
on
a negative way. Change preposition
in
By contrast
, they might earn more than their old occupation.
On the one hand, working far from their Linking Words
families
and Use synonyms
friends
may reduce their relationships. When they have to Use synonyms
work
far away from their homes they might argue with their partners and Use synonyms
friends
because they miss them, they want to hug, kiss and touch them. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
As a result
of their Linking Words
conditions
they cannot. Add a comma
conditions,
For instance
, My father Linking Words
have
to Change the verb form
has
work
in Istanbul which is seven hundred Use synonyms
kilometers
far from our home, we see each other twice or three times a year. Change the spelling
kilometres
In
Change preposition
According
according to
Linking Words
this
, my mom and father argue because they miss their partner. Linking Words
Nonetheless
, when they meet they get on well like nothing happened. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
people
who have to Use synonyms
work
far from their houses might cause relationship issues because they miss each other.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
go Use synonyms
other
cities to Change preposition
to other
earning
more than their old job. Nowadays, money is the key Wrong verb form
earn
of
everything, If you want to buy something you should have money, if you want to book a holiday you should have money Change preposition
to
due to
Linking Words
that
sometimes moving to another place forCorrect pronoun usage
apply
working
might be beneficial for his/her family. Replace the word
work
For example
, My father earns twice more than his old job. Linking Words
This
earning make us more comfortable Linking Words
such
as ı can buy whatever ı want and we buy Linking Words
house
Add an article
a house
to
my sister. Change preposition
for
Therefore
, sometimes working away from home might be advantageous for Linking Words
families
, if they profit more.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, Linking Words
Growing
number of Change the article
a Growing
the Growing
people
Use synonyms
move
far from their homes Wrong verb form
are moving
due to
Linking Words
work
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
this
situation has advantages and disadvantages because If they earn more than past, their Linking Words
economical
condition might be very comfortable to afford everything. Replace the word
economic
Nevertheless
, working away from their Linking Words
friends
and Use synonyms
families
might affect Use synonyms
thier
relations between their partners and kids.Correct your spelling
their
the
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