You bought TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it didn't work properly you called customers service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help Write letter to the company and in your letter •introduce yourself •explain the problem •and state what action you would like from the company
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Dear sir or madam
I am writing in order to complain about the television that your company manufactures.
I went
your
shop a few weeks ago. I bought a Change preposition
to your
TV
however
l
have problem
now. When I back home Add an article
a problem
the problem
l
discovered TV
did not work. Correct article usage
the TV
l
am disappointed with the goods that your company manufactures. My first complaint is TV
poor quality. In addition
to this
absolutely expensive. I am not all pleased that good. To resolve the problem
l
would appreciate it if you could because l
have not even use
it. I would not recommend it to other people. In my Change the verb form
used
opinion
there is a Add a comma
opinion,
problem
with the internal structure of the TV
or l
do not know how to use it. I have written a complaint letter to you several times but no help was
given. I am looking forward to your reply and a resolution to my Wrong verb form
has been
problem
Your
faithfully
Turayeva RayhonaCorrect the word
Yours
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task achievement
Include specific details such as the TV model, date of purchase, and reference number of your previous complaints to make your letter more comprehensive.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. For instance, your introduction, explanation of the problem, and desired resolution should each be in separate paragraphs.
task achievement
The letter clearly introduces the problem and explains the situation adequately.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter follow appropriate formal letter-writing conventions.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.