You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week aga but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company In your letter ■introduce yourself ■explain the situation ■say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam
I am one of your customers and I bought a kind of technologies that have good quality. a kind of country and
However
, this
time I am writing complaint
about Add an article
a complaint
camera
which I bought Correct article usage
a camera
15days
ago from your company in Green Street.
My job as Correct your spelling
15 days
photographer
Add an article
a photographer
including
Replace the word
includes
travel
Correct your spelling
travelling
Change preposition
to
take
photos Wrong verb form
taking
them
. It was unsatisfactory to Change preposition
of them
working
and had a different problem. After using Wrong verb form
work
camera
, I Add an article
the camera
a camera
didn't
Verb problem
wasn't
satisfy
Replace the word
satisfied
to
my work and lost my partners who had Change preposition
with
a very good qualifications
.
The camera that I bought is Correct the article-noun agreement
very good qualifications
a very good qualification
V380
Pro 4Mp Ultra HD model. When I bought it, saler introduced Correct article usage
a V380
information
and he assured Correct article usage
the information
it
was working well Correct pronoun usage
me it
to
me. After I got home and took Change preposition
for
photo
Correct article usage
a photo
my
garden, it Change preposition
of my
hasn't
working well. In the following days, I Verb problem
wasn't
have
found that there were Unnecessary verb
apply
less
effects and memory problems.
Despite the fact, I have returned it and spoke problems to your company a week ago, it has still not been repaired. I would be grateful if you could refund and reply Change the quantifier
fewer
my
letter. I look forward to your explanation.
Change preposition
to my
Your
faithfully
ShodiyonaCorrect the word
Yours
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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task achievement
There are some grammar and vocabulary issues, such as 'a kind of technologies', 'take photos them', and 'saler'. A quick review and some corrections would make the letter more professional.
task achievement
You have provided all the necessary information, including your problem, past actions, and your desired solution.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for this type of communication.