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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table above formats the output of milk production in four different places in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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, the
Netherlands
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 has the greatest amount of
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liters
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litres
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;
in addition
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,
Guatemala
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 has the lowest number of
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liters
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. In 1990, both the
Netherlands
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 and Australia
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produced around 11.25 million
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liters
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.
On the other hand
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, Tanzania had 87
thousand
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liters
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, and
Guatemala
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 had 26
thousand
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. In 2000,
Guatemala
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 doubled the number of
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liters
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;
however
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, Tanzania had increased by 50
thousand
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, but Australia and the
Netherlands
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 had decreased by around 100 to 150
thousand
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. In 2010, the
Netherlands
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 had increased by approximately 300
thousand
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, and Australia had a slide by 2 million.
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, Tanzania increased by 10
thousand
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, and
Guatemala
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 got higher by 30
percent
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per cent
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.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words netherlands, liters, guatemala, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annually
  • production
  • trends
  • increased
  • decreased
  • significantly
  • comparatively
  • figures
  • ranking
  • summarize
  • observations
  • patterns
  • consistently
  • growth
  • decline
  • noticeable
  • highlight
  • emphasize
  • yearly
  • countries
  • data
  • support
  • insights
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