A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females in Great Britain who
had
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driving
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a driving
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licence
,
it is clear that
women who are over 65 are the lowest owners of a driving
licence
compared to other age groups.
Initially
, the number of males that own a driving
licence
between 20-64 years old
are
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above 15000,
whereas
women are lower than men in all age groups including teenage period.
However
, in the teenage years ( 16-19) despite the fact that the quantity of boys that have a driving
licence
is higher than girls, there isn't a big gap between them.
Furthermore
, the lowest average amount of owning a driving
licence
in both genders
were
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in the age groups of 16-19 and +65,
on the other hand
, the highest average number was 20-34 and 35-54 which are approximately similar to each other.
To sum up
, boys significantly have a higher demand for
using
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used
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vehicles than girls do, mainly because driving a vehicle is considered to be a tough
habbit
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habit
.
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