You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph demonstrates the three types of fuel produced at different levels between 1981 and 2000 in the UK.
Overall
, the production
level
of petroleum maintained the highest
level
of energy
units
over the two decades. The number
was rising
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from around 90
from
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1981, peaking at 140, and stayed at the plateau from 1984 to 1987. The next three
years
witnessed a slight drop before the number climbed up again between 1990 and 2000. Compared to
the
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petroleum, the production
level
of
the
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coal during the 20
years
presented a gradual decline with a plummet in 1983, bottoming out at the
level
of around 39 energy
units
. Despite a slight increase from 1984 to 1986, the
units
went down steadily over the next 14
years
.
In contrast
, the
units
number of
the
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natural gas remained at about 40 during the first 10
years
with a notable increase taking place from 1991 to 2000.
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  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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