The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Overall

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, the diagram illustrates the process of the manufacture of frozen fish pies beginning with the delivery of

potatoes

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and ending up with the storing or dispatching.

Firstly

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, the

potatoes

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are delivered by the truck

up

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to one month. After arriving at the manufacturing factory, the freshly arrived

potatoes

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are

then

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cleaned and

peel

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peeled

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. They are

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sliced into smaller pieces and

place

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placed

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into pots to boil at a very high temperature until it is soft.

Next,

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the

potatoes

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are chilled and stored in plastic bags.

Following

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this

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, fresh

salmon

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are delivered in less than 12 hours. After that, both lemon juice and salt are added to the

salmon

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to intensify its flavour.

Subsequently

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, they are steamed in the oven for about 15 minutes. The skins and bones of the

salmon

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are

then

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removed by manufacturers,

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further

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and further

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checked by the inspectors to finish with the preparation of

salmon

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.

Consequently

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, peas, sauce,

salmon

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and

potatoes

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are put into a microwavable container

Finally

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, the fish

pie

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pies

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are wrapped by the workers, left to

frozen

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freeze

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for a

while

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and

are

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stored and dispatched.