The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, the diagram illustrates the process of the manufacture of frozen fish pies beginning with the delivery of potatoes
and ending up with the storing or dispatching.
Firstly
, the potatoes
are delivered by the truck up
to one month. After arriving at the manufacturing factory, the freshly arrived Change preposition
for up
potatoes
are then
cleaned and peel
. They are Wrong verb form
peeled
then
sliced into smaller pieces and place
into pots to boil at a very high temperature until it is soft. Wrong verb form
placed
Next,
the potatoes
are chilled and stored in plastic bags.
Following
this
, fresh salmon
are delivered in less than 12 hours. After that, both lemon juice and salt are added to the salmon
to intensify its flavour. Subsequently
, they are steamed in the oven for about 15 minutes. The skins and bones of the salmon
are then
removed by manufacturers, further
checked by the inspectors to finish with the preparation of Correct word choice
and further
salmon
. Consequently
, peas, sauce, salmon
and potatoes
are put into a microwavable container
Finally
, the fish pie
are wrapped by the workers, left to Fix the agreement mistake
pies
frozen
for a Change the form of the verb
freeze
while
and are
stored and dispatched.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes, salmon with synonyms.
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