graphs below shows the manufacuring process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures highlight the process by which
sugar
is produced from sugar
cane. There are 7 steps in the diagram, starting from growing sugar
cane to finishing the process by making sugar
ready to use with some special method.
First of all, the sugar
canes are grown for a period of 12 to 18 months, and then
they are harvested either by using special farming vehicles or by hand. Once the plants are harvested, they are then
crushed and their juice is obtained. Following
this
, the juice is purified through a Limestone filter. After the purifying stage, the juice is poured into an evaporator and placed on top of direct heat, which makes the liquid transform into a different form, called syrup. At this
point, sugar
crystals are seperated
from the syrup with the help of a centrifuge. In the Correct your spelling
separated
last
step
the crystals are dried and cooled and the Add a comma
step,
sugar
is ready.Submitted by bahram.azizzade on
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