The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
chart represents the total spending of three different categories across unique
age
groups
in 2014. Different
age
groups
have various types of expenditure. In the
under 30
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community, there is a major gap between the spending
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money on restaurants and hotels to using their income on food, drinks and entertainment. There is a clear difference in those aspects by approximately 8 per cent which represents that the majority of adults under 30 use their money on hotels and restaurants.
On the other hand
, when it comes to the people of ages 62-75 it is viewed in the chart that a small number of their paying is going to hotels and restaurants and the majority goes to food, drinks and entertainment. In comparison
also
citizens over 76 pay a lot for food and drinks, and
this
is the same percentage as people of ages 61-75 when paying for entertainment. It is clearly seen from the chart that people ages 31-45 spend their money wisely across the three different facilities as their percentages are considered to be very close
together with
no more than 10 per cent of a gap.
As well as
adults in the
age
groups
of 40-60 years. In
cocnlusion
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conclusion
, it is illustrated from the graph that different
age
groups
have different
type
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types
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of spending based on their needs.
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