The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The illustrations
demonstrates
the phases and equipment used in making Change the verb form
demonstrate
cement
and how cement
is used in the production of concrete for building
.
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
Overall
, cement
production is man-made
linear process with six stages. It Add an article
a man-made
is began
with mixing limestone and clay, Change the verb form
begins
ends
up by putting Correct word choice
and ends
cement
in bags for following
transporting. Concrete production, Correct article usage
the following
in contrast
to previous
one, only Correct article usage
the previous
have
two stages and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
have
much more raw materials used in the process.
First of all, limestone and clay are crushed by Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Correct article usage
a crasher
crasher
and become powder whichCorrect your spelling
crusher
is went
through Wrong verb form
goes
mixer
. After Add an article
the mixer
a mixer
powder
Correct article usage
the powder
are
mixed in Correct subject-verb agreement
is
mixer
it Add an article
the mixer
is went
to Wrong verb form
goes
rotating
heater where it is Correct article usage
a rotating
heat
up and Wrong verb form
heated
became
Wrong verb form
becomes
cement
. Then
, it is placed in bags and transported.
Consequently
, cement
and water are placed in concrete
Add an article
the concrete
a concrete
mixer
by 15% and 10% respectively. Subsequently
, sand and gravel are also
put in concrete
Add an article
the concrete
a concrete
mixer
as the first one contains 25% of all concrete , whereas
gravel contains 50% of it. Concrete
Correct article usage
A concrete
mixer
mix
substance Correct subject-verb agreement
mixes
by
Change preposition
in
clockwise
direction .Correct article usage
a clockwise
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