The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented table compares data about how many people who are managers or workforce are women in 5 various countries.
Overall
, it is important that the best country which has a lot of women who are working is the US, but Japan has a lot of workforce.
While
Egypt has fewer employees who are females.
According to
the chart, the main country which has a lot of labour force is Japan with 48%;
however
, for
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it was only 17%. The US, the second
one
for labour force but the first
one
with Astraliala for manager, is 2% less than Japan in the first item, and it has 43% for the second
one
. The picture shows the third level for the workforce is the same between Australia and Sri Lanka at 42%;
additionally
, Australia has the first level with the US in the manager;
nevertheless
, Sri Lanka has the
last
level in
this
thing by 9%.
In addition
, the proportion of Egypt, which has the roughly minimum percentage in two categories, is 20% for labour forces and 12% for another
one
.
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