The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts illustrate the percentages of employed 60-64 years old
men
and women
in Australia, Japan
, USA, and Belgium
in 1970 and 2000. Overall
, Japan
has the highest percentage
of men
and women
employed in 1970 and 2000 while
Belgium
has the lowest percentage
of female employees in 2000 and the USA has the lowest percentage
of male employees in 2000.
In 1970, Belgium
had the lowest amount of female workers
with only 8%, this
is in contrast
with male workers
with 79% in the same year. Australian male workforce tripled the number of female workers
in 1970 with 74% and 18% respectively. In Japan
and the USA, the percentage
of employed men
is double that of women
with 84% men
and 43% women
for Japan
and 73% men
and 36% women
respectively.
On the other hand
, in 2000, there was a decrease in the workforce of both men
and women
in Japan
and Belgium
. There was a significant drop of around 60% in Belgium
from 79% to 19%. Men
and women
workers
in Japan
had a slight decrease with only 76% and 40% left employed. Working Australian men
also
had a significant decline of around 50%. However
, both Australian and Japanese women
had a slight increase with 19% and 38% respectively.Submitted by estillorericamae on
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