The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts illustrate the percentages of employed 60-64 years old
men
and Use synonyms
women
in Australia, Use synonyms
Japan
, USA, and Use synonyms
Belgium
in 1970 and 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
Japan
has the highest Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
employed in 1970 and 2000 Use synonyms
while
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Belgium
has the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
of female employees in 2000 and the USA has the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
of male employees in 2000.
In 1970, Use synonyms
Belgium
had the lowest amount of female Use synonyms
workers
with only 8%, Use synonyms
this
is Linking Words
in contrast
with male Linking Words
workers
with 79% in the same year. Australian male workforce tripled the number of female Use synonyms
workers
in 1970 with 74% and 18% respectively. In Use synonyms
Japan
and the USA, the Use synonyms
percentage
of employed Use synonyms
men
is double that of Use synonyms
women
with 84% Use synonyms
men
and 43% Use synonyms
women
for Use synonyms
Japan
and 73% Use synonyms
men
and 36% Use synonyms
women
respectively.
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On the other hand
, in 2000, there was a decrease in the workforce of both Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
in Use synonyms
Japan
and Use synonyms
Belgium
. There was a significant drop of around 60% in Use synonyms
Belgium
from 79% to 19%. Use synonyms
Men
and Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
workers
in Use synonyms
Japan
had a slight decrease with only 76% and 40% left employed. Working Australian Use synonyms
men
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also
had a significant decline of around 50%. Linking Words
However
, both Australian and Japanese Linking Words
women
had a slight increase with 19% and 38% respectively.Use synonyms
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