The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate the percentages of employed 60-64 years old
men
and
women
in Australia,
Japan
, USA, and
Belgium
in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
,
Japan
has the highest
percentage
of
men
and
women
employed in 1970 and 2000
while
Belgium
has the lowest
percentage
of female employees in 2000 and the USA has the lowest
percentage
of male employees in 2000. In 1970,
Belgium
had the lowest amount of female
workers
with only 8%,
this
is
in contrast
with male
workers
with 79% in the same year. Australian male workforce tripled the number of female
workers
in 1970 with 74% and 18% respectively. In
Japan
and the USA, the
percentage
of employed
men
is double that of
women
with 84%
men
and 43%
women
for
Japan
and 73%
men
and 36%
women
respectively.
On the other hand
, in 2000, there was a decrease in the workforce of both
men
and
women
in
Japan
and
Belgium
. There was a significant drop of around 60% in
Belgium
from 79% to 19%.
Men
and
women
workers
in
Japan
had a slight decrease with only 76% and 40% left employed. Working Australian
men
also
had a significant decline of around 50%.
However
, both Australian and Japanese
women
had a slight increase with 19% and 38% respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, japan, belgium, percentage, workers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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