The diagrams below display information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate the production of a fish pie and the manufacturing stages.

Overall

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, both procedures are natural and linear

process

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processes

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.Which has 13 stages.The whole operation begins with the delivery

a

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of

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fish pie products and finishes with wrapping them for sending to the store.

To begin

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with, the first stage describes transporting

a potatoes

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potatoes

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,

before

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for

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up to a month.

Then

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, the technique machine cleaned all of the

tater

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taters

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, more precisely a peel.

After

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this

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, they cut slices and boiled

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then

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them

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in the water.

Then

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the potatoes were chilled. So in the end it was delivered to the stock.

Subsequently

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, there are the

last

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eight stages.After the conveyance of fresh salmon, they added some lemon juice and salted apricots. They used

steam

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a steam

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oven for fish,

several

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and several

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people cleaned and removed skin and bones from the peach.The checker inserted all of the

process

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processes

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.Before adding potatoes, they attached the prepared peas and sauce.

Besides

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, they completely wrapped and

frozen

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froze

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all of the products.

Finally

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dispatched to the reserve.