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The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided map illustrates a city at the moment and
also
 a planned
future
 for
this
 area. A glance at the graph reveals that the whole
town
 will experience a considerable amount of varies and construction in the
future
.
Firstly
,there is an
Air field
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Airfield
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 near the Roundabout right now that only is connected
with
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to
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 one
street
in
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on
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 the left side,which is going to be demolished and replaced by
industrial
Correct article usage
an industrial
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 estate which is connected
with
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to
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Railway
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the Railway
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 as well in
northwest
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the northwest
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 of the area in
near
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the near
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future
.
Moreover
,there is
not any
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no
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 square in the middle of the Railway.
However
,the government is going to introduce a Roundabout beside the Gas station. It is interesting to note that the
Town
 center and build-up area ring road will remain unchanged except that a
street
 will
erect
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 which will be called A4
street
 that it will connect to
Rail way
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Railway
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 and A2
street
 in the east of the region.
In addition
,the gas station will be levelled
of
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off
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 in the middle of the
town
 in the
future
.
Additionally
,the mayor has
proprsed
Correct your spelling
proposed
 a plan in order to build a main road which will be joined to the
Town
center
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centre
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 after some years.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, town, street with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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