The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below shows percentages of students with different attitudes for facilities in the

 university in the UK in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table compares the level of satisfaction with three categories of facilities in a UK university in 2008, which was measured in two groups of
students
:
undergraduates
and
postgraduates
.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was no significant difference in the attitudes towards the facilities between the two groups of
students
; both
undergraduates
and
postgraduates
were most satisfied with the study
facility
,
while
the cafeteria was liked by the lowest percentage of
students
. For the study
facility
, almost all
students
expressed satisfaction, with 85% of
undergraduates
and 90% of
postgraduate
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postgraduates
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very satisfied. Those who were not satisfied only accounted for around 5%.
This
pattern
also
applied to social
facility
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facilities
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but the figure for
students
feeling very satisfied was slightly lower, with 75% for
undergraduates
and 65% for
postgraduates
.
Additionally
,
although
the proportion of
postgraduates
not content with social
facility
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facilities
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was twice that of
undergraduates
, the figures were still insignificant (10% and 5% respectively). Regarding
cafeteria
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the cafeteria
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, only half of the
undergraduates
were very satisfied, followed by 35% for those quite satisfied and 15% for those dissatisfied.
By contrast
, more
postgraduates
had negative feelings towards it (35%) and only 40% were very satisfied.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, undergraduates, postgraduates, facility with synonyms.
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