The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented illustration gives information on the man-made 6-step process of
glass
recycling.
Overall
, as can be seen,
glass
can be utilized and reused multiple times. Waste becomes as fresh and new as the products before the purchase. All stages of the cycle happen in order, which begins with the gathering of thrown
glass
products in a wastebasket and ends with goods being transported to the supermarket. At
first,
glass
is collected in a house or workplace from a recycle can.
Following
this
, it is taken to the treatment facility, where it is cleaned and disinfected in special mechanisms. After the sterilization,
glass
is smashed into small pieces, which
then
are put in high-temperature conditions for them to melt. When crushed
glass
is molten, the liquid is poured into special moulds of any shape.
Finally
, finished goods made of reprocessed
glass
are delivered to the supermarket to be consumed and the cycle starts again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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