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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
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The line
graph
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 depicts information about the number of
Indian
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 and
Chinese
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 people,
as well as
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 the predicted population growth during a 50-year period, from 2000 to 2050.
Overall
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, what stands out from the
graph
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 is that
Indian
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 people show an upward trend,
while
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Chinese
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 people have a downward trend. Another interesting point is that the numbers in the
graph
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 are represented in billions. Regarding the
Chinese
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 population, despite starting at around 1.2
billion
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 in 2000,
this
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 figure
then
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 increased sharply, reaching nearly 1.5
billion
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 in the middle of 2020.
Following
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this
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, there is a slight decrease in the number of
Chinese
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 citizens, with 1.4
billion
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at the end
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 of the period. In terms of the
Indian
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 population, it can be seen clearly from the
graph
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 that the trend of
Indian
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 citizens shows a continuous increase throughout the period, starting at 1.0
billion
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 and ending at 1.6
billion
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, indian, chinese, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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