You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: •say where you think you left the papers •explain why they are so important •tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Mr John
I hope I don't bother you. But
this
is very important for me.If you remember, I recently attended a meeting at your hotel and I left some crucial papers
at the hotel.I returned home and I noticed that I didn't have my notable papers
. I think these papers
are
left on the desk in my room because I was working on Wrong verb form
were
the
new project.
Generally speaking, these Correct article usage
a
papers
are my new project. Last
week I went to show off this
new project of mine. In addition
, I found a partner. But I realized that I had forgotten these essential papers
.I really need these papers
right now. As a result
of this
, we can not start work without these important papers
.
I would be terribly disappointed. Hopefully, you will definitely find and send me my significant papers
.And I really wish I had not lost my important papers
. I would like to thank all of your hotel.
I hope that you will read my letter and reply in time. I will Add a missing verb
be please
please
Replace the word
pleased
of
Correct your spelling
if
yours
will send me my important Correct pronoun usage
you
papers
. Thank you in advance!!!!
Sincerely FatimaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
For task response, ensure that each part of the prompt is addressed thoroughly. You've covered all the necessary points but try to be more specific about the actions you would like the manager to take.
coherence cohesion
Your letter generally follows a logical structure, but tightening the organization could make your points clearer. Consider combining related ideas to avoid repetition.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are polite and suitable for a formal letter.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph addresses a single idea, which improves clarity.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is appropriate for a formal request.