The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph depicts the information regarding the
proportion
of phone calls by British people which was categorised into three parts such
as local, Mobiles
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mobile
nationl
and international during the time period of 1995-2002. The data is calibrated Correct your spelling
national
jn
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in
Minutes
( billions).
Overall
, it is noticeable that the local call
made by people Fix the agreement mistake
calls
was
tending down despite having the largest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
proportion
during the whole time period. In contrast
, Moblie usage was in small proportion
but showing
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showed
the
upward trend Correct article usage
an
similarly
, the interest of people for
making national and international was uphill.
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in
details
, more than 70 Fix the agreement mistake
detail
minutes
(billions
)person Fix the agreement mistake
billion
was
using the telephone Correct subject-verb agreement
were
for making
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the
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apply
locals
calls in 1995,which Fix the agreement mistake
local
was
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increasing
and reached Wrong verb form
increased
at
90 Change preposition
apply
minutes
and remained constant until next
year. It was seen a steady fall until Correct article usage
the next
end
of Add an article
the end
year
and reached Add an article
the year
at
the same Change preposition
apply
proportion
which was in the
1995.Change the article
apply
In contrast
, the value for national and international was less than 40 minutes
which showed a contined
growth in the figures.
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continued
Additionally
, the usage of mobile phones was negligible in 1995,it started getting
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gaining
the
popularity after 2000 and increased by Correct article usage
apply
four folds
in 2002.Correct your spelling
fourfold
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