The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph depicts the information regarding the
proportion
of phone calls by British people which was categorised into three parts
such
as local,
Mobiles
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,
nationl
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national
and international during the time period of 1995-2002. The data is calibrated
jn
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in
Minutes
( billions).
Overall
, it is noticeable that the local
call
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calls
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made by people
was
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were
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tending down despite having the largest
proportion
during the whole time period.
In contrast
, Moblie usage was in small
proportion
but
showing
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showed
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the
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an
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upward trend
similarly
, the interest of people
for
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in
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making national and international was uphill. Looking into more
details
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detail
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, more than 70
minutes
(
billions
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billion
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)person
was
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were
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using the telephone
for making
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the
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apply
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locals
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local
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calls in 1995,which
was
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gradually
increasing
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increased
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and reached
at
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apply
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90
minutes
and remained constant until
next
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the next
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year. It was seen a steady fall until
end
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the end
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of
year
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the year
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and reached
at
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apply
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the same
proportion
which was in
the
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1995.
In contrast
, the value for national and international was less than 40
minutes
which showed a
contined
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continued
growth in the figures.
Additionally
, the usage of mobile phones was negligible in 1995,it started
getting
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the
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popularity after 2000 and increased by
four folds
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fourfold
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in 2002.
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