The charts beloow show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak othe languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information regarding the proportion of pupils who Correct article usage
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university in Change preposition
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UK
. They were not only able to speak in English but Correct article usage
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also
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a tendency to talk in other languages as well during the time period of 2000 to 2010
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Overall
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Spanish and other languages were used by most of the students in both Correct article usage
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years
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while
English users dipped after a decade.
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that
30% and 15% Spanish and other languages were spoken by pupils in 2000 which Correct word choice
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was
increased by 5% after ten Unnecessary verb
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years
,made up of 35 and 20 percent , respectively .
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In contrast
, there was a drop in the figures Linking Words
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for
french
users that was 20% in 2000 and halved after ten Capitalize word
French
years
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Similarly
, in the use of Linking Words
English
it was 15%. Which became 10% Add a comma
English,
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year
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the year
were remained
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remained
have remained
years
.Use synonyms
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