The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of
people
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in various
age
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groups who donated money to charity between 1990 and 2010 in the United Kingdom.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the diagram more cash was paid by the middle
age
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group
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and the lowest was by the younger
people
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.
While
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senior citizens' donation was augmented over two decades. The ratio of money paid to charities fluctuated over two decades. It is conspicuous that the highest amount was paid by the 36-50
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old
people
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, who donated nearly 43% in 1990 and 51-65
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old gents were paid 35% in 1990, that
group
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was the second highest among all the others, after that the seniors ( 65 plus) only contributed to 32% .
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, the 18-25
years
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old adults paid 17% in 1990, which was boosted by 32% in 26-35
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old folks. Probing ahead, the
age
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group
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of 51-65 donated close to 39% in 2010, which was the highest donated by any other
group
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. The least interest was taken by the 18-25
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old, they only gave 6% in the same year, which is the lowest as compared to 1990 by the same
age
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group
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.
According to
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age
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, the number of donations was expanded to 35% and 38% was paid by 36-50 and 51-65
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old respectively.
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, the 65 plus
people
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donated 35%, which was higher than 1990 in the same
group
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, group, years with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable donations
  • age range/bracket/group
  • percentage (%)
  • 20-year period
  • British people
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • significant change
  • donation patterns
  • remained stable
  • highest/lowest
  • observe
  • compare
  • summarize
  • comment on
  • relevant features
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