You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter • Explain that you would like to apply for the job • Give some details of any relevant experience that you have • Specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Pokiza and I am a student of INHA University. I noticed that you were offering a part-time
job
and I would like to ask to
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this
job
to me.
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apply
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, I have to save money to pay the bills.
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I can do everything except that cooking. Because I am afraid of Add a comma
hand,
burn
the dishes Change the verb form
burning
while
cooking. I can mop the floor and also
I can wash the dishes. If you will give me a job
from
your restaurant I'll really appreciate you.
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. I hope you as soon as offer ma
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me
job
quickly.
I look forward to your reply
Yours faithfully
PokizaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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suitable writing tone
Be careful with your language to maintain a consistent tone throughout your letter. For instance, a more formal tone would be preferable when addressing a potential employer, which means avoiding expressions like 'give this job to me' and instead using 'I am writing to express my interest in the part-time job opportunity at your esteemed restaurant.'
logical structure
Avoid redundancy and clarify your points. For example, 'On the other hand' suggests a contrast but is misused here. Instead, directly state your willingness to perform the various tasks, like 'I have experience in mopping floors and washing dishes, and am confident that I can contribute positively to your team.'
complete response
You clearly state your availability and working hours, which helps the manager to know when you can work.
complete response
Your letter covers all required content: expressing interest, providing relevant experience, and detailing your availability.