The line chart displays the cities population proportion in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, along with the projections for 2030 and 2040.

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The line chart illustrates the urban

population

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proportion from 1970 to 2020 and its prediction for 2030 and 2040 in 4 countries of Southeast Asia

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Malaysia

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and

Indonesia

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have identical patterns of urban

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proportion which constantly increased over the years.

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Philippines

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The Philippines

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Malaysia

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Thailand

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, and

Indonesia

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predicted will soar and reach their peak in 2040.

Indonesia

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started with the lowest

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of the urban

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but

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it significantly increased to 2020 passing

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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and

Thailand

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. The increasing urban

population

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Indonesia

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is predicted to rise until 2040. Like

Indonesia

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, the

portion

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of cities

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Malaysia

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has jumped from 1970 to 2020 and it is predicted will rise by 2040, but

Malaysia

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started with a doubled

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Indonesia

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's city

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proportion. The

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of the urban

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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and

Thailand

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has gradually increased from 1970 to 1990 but

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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fell in 2000 and 2010

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rose in 2020 and is predicted to rise by 2040.

Thailand

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had a stagnation period from 1990 to 2000 and 2010 to 2020 but

then

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it is predicted to increase by 2040.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, indonesia, philippines, thailand, portion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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181 words

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The line chart displays the cities population proportion in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, along with the projections for 2030 and 2040.

Levels of depression and antisocial behavior in children have increased dramatically in modern societies. This situation has led many people to believe that childhood itself is in crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interesting in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You have just bought a video game console which does not work well. write a letter to the ventor. say what is wrong with this piece of electronics. say what you have done to address this issue. find out if you could have it replaced.