The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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This
report derives from the bar graphs which enumerate the proportions of males and females aged between 60 and 64 in employment in four countries, especially Belgium, the USA, Japan and Australia in 1970 and 2000.
A glance at the chart clearly reveals that the overall
trends encountered a tremendous downturn in the male employment chart. Furthermore
, the women
's graph demonstrates the fact that the unemployment ratio of women
is much higher than men.
To be specific, the worth figures of Belgium men rapidly downfall, comprising a solid 79% in 1970 followed by a firm 19% in 2000. In comparison to other countries which elucidated an extreme decline in their working rate, Japan showed a decent decrease from a solid 85% to a firm 74%.
Moreover
, the second graph's predilection of Belgium women
in their work illustrates that they rarely work for their livings compared to other nations.
In stark contrast to men's tendency in employment during the observation periods, women
in the USA and Australia showed an increasing proportion of working.Submitted by rainbowlck on
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