The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar charts compare the proportions of males and females aged 60 to 64 years in employment in four nations between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of men in 1970 was higher than that of number
in 2000 in all countries. Meanwhile, the figure
for women in 2000 was larger than that in 1970 except in Japan.
Regarding males, Japan had the biggest number
in 1970 and 2000 compared to the other nations, accounting for 85% and 74% respectively. While
the figure
for Belgium ranked second at 79% in 1970, it reduced significantly to 19% over three decades. In 1970, the number
of the USA and Australia accounted for 73% and 76%, before declining to 55% and 47% respectively.
Turning to females, the proportion of all nations was almost the same. The number
of Japan remained the highest, illustrating 43% in 1970 and 40% in 2000 respectively. Nevertheless
, the figure
for the USA depicted a slight increase by
3% over the period. Change preposition
of
Similarly
, a gentle growth in the figure
for Australia occurred from 16% to 18% throughout the period. Lastly
, the percentage of Belgium boosted slightly by just 1%.Submitted by pandin21 on
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