The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map depicts significant changes which have happened in the town of Stromer from 1995 to nowadays.
Overall
, the area has changed considerably with the changing of the buildings, such
as replaced forests with houses and shops. In addition
, nowadays, roads have been extended over the town.
Regarding the north side
, it is interesting to note that there used to be many green places on the western side
of the town, but nowadays, these places are made smaller and redeveloped into apartments in the north, commercial markets in the middle, and schools. However
, north-east forests have been renovated into airports these days. While
the rest forests stayed the same, new apartments took take place of houses. One major alteration has been the conversion of the middle shops into a school.
In terms of the south side
, the agricultural place which is the farmland has been unexpanded to be only in the south-east side
and replaced into three different buildings including three shops, four apartments, and houses.Submitted by alharrasialanood7 on
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