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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The provided line graph serves as an insightful illustration of different modes of
transportation
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 used to move
goods
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 in large
quantites
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quantities
 in
th
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the
 UK between 1974 and 2002. The units of measure used
is
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are
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 in
million
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tonnes
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. The
overall
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 impression of the chart is that the road
had
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has
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 always been the most popular medium for transporting
goods
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.
While
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 pipeline was the least
prefered
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preferred
 method for logistics.
To begin
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 with,
pipeline
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the pipeline
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 started with
mearly
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nearly
 5
million
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tonnes
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 of
transportation
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 in 1974 which rose significantly by the end of 1982 reaching 25
million
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tonnes
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 approximately.
However
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, Pipelines were quite stagnant after it for a little
while
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. And
then
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ulimately
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ultimately
 dropped to 20
million
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tonnes
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 between 1994 and 2002.
Furthermore
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, rail
transportation
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 had always been erratic starting from 40
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 which dropped slowly to 30
million
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tonnes
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 in 1994, and ultimately elevated again to reach a little over 40
Million
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tonnes
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 by 2002.
In addition
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 to that,
transportation
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 of
goods
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 via water
become
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became
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 quite popular almost 60
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 were transported between 1982 and 1994 which dropped drastically to 50
million
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tonnes
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1998
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in 1998
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 and later reached its pinnacle at 65
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
Thereafter
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, road courier services which were the most popular mode of logistics hiked gradually over the period of 28 years and peaked at almost 100
million
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tonnes
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 by 2002.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, goods, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freight transportation
  • logistics
  • modal share
  • tonnage
  • volumes of goods
  • to transport
  • to surpass
  • to decline
  • to fluctuate
  • steady increase/decrease
  • to peak
  • to plateau
  • significant growth/drop
  • to outstrip
  • transportation sector
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