The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The percentages of males and females aged 60-64 in
employment
in four different countries in certain periods between 1970 and 2000 were shown in that picture.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the charts that, Japan was the highest while
Belgium was the least in a specific period. On the other hand
, the men aged 60-64 in employment
higher than the women in a given period.
It is obvious from the first picture that, Japan started at 85% and then
it dropped by 74% male aged 60-64 in employment
. However
, Belgium jumped down from 79% to 19% and it took place last
place than other countries.
According to
the second graph , the number of women aged 60-64 in employment
increased in three various countries between 1980 and 2000, in contrast
, only Japan went down from 43 to 40. In the USA went up from 36% to 39% between 1970 and 2000. Also
, Australia had risen by 18%.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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