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You recently attended meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. • Say where you think you left the papers • Explain why they are so important • Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to ask for information about lost
documents
 in your hotel. I
have
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had
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 just
came
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come
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 home,
then
 I realized that I
have
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had
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 forgotten my personal papers. I came
there
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here
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 for
job
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a job
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 interview
hence
, I think that they are in the main hall of the inn. Because
last
 time I had
conversation
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 with
hotel
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the hotel
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 owner. The
documents
 are necessary for today
,
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 because there are my identification card, license and necessary abbreviation. I live in the village and tomorrow I am going to
the
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a
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 foreign country
therefore
 my
documents
need
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needed
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 to
me
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be me
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, because my town is small and there is
lack
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a lack
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 of public transport, so
that
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, having a license is
reinforcing
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reinforces
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 to drive a car in a city rather than travelling somewhere with a taxi.
Therefore
, I desire
to
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you to
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 deliver
my
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all of the
documents
 to me as I said above my personal papers need to
me
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. You can contact me on my mobile phone number which is: 916357595. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ozod Umarov
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grammar
Try to proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and improve clarity. For example, 'I have just came home, then I realized' should be 'I just came home and realized.'
structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity. This helps the reader follow your points more easily.
clarity
The letter clearly explains where the papers were left, their importance, and what action is required from the manager.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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