The diagrams below show a site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate the design of an airport plan in two stages, the current version and the

post development

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format after the completion of development next year.

Overall

, it can be seen that access to bag drop, ATM, sky train, shops and car hire will be provided next year

while

walkway is going to be removed.

Furthermore

, the area at the top will be expanded and a V shape space will be added to it next year to

accomodate

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accommodate

more planes.

Firstly

, The walkway will be

ommited

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omitted

, the square area will be enhanced by

addition

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the addition

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of a

V shaped

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V-shaped

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area on it providing

the

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apply

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room for 18 planes

instead

of 8 to board passengers.

Moreover

, there will be access to

newly

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the newly

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constructed sky train inside the expanded boarding hall

while

there will be several airport markets available just outside the hall.

Secondly

, locations of Security, passport control,

customes

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customs

customers

, departure and arrival entrance and exit will

remaine

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remain

remained

unchanged. Meanwhile, there will be a new cafe on the arrival side,

also

an ATM and a car hire will be added there.

Additionally

, on the departure side, check-in will be moved to the right to replace the cafe,

while

bag drop will replace the check-in and the cafe will be relocated to the south of it.

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