The diagrams below show a site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagrams illustrate the design of an airport plan in two stages, the current version and the
post development
format after the completion of development next year.
Add a hyphen
post-development
Overall
, it can be seen that access to bag drop, ATM, sky train, shops and car hire will be provided next year while
walkway is going to be removed. Furthermore
, the area at the top will be expanded and a V shape space will be added to it next year to accomodate
more planes.
Correct your spelling
accommodate
Firstly
, The walkway will be ommited
, the square area will be enhanced by Correct your spelling
omitted
addition
of a Add an article
the addition
V shaped
area on it providing Add a hyphen
V-shaped
the
room for 18 planes Correct article usage
apply
instead
of 8 to board passengers. Moreover
, there will be access to newly
constructed sky train inside the expanded boarding hall Correct article usage
the newly
while
there will be several airport markets available just outside the hall.
Secondly
, locations of Security, passport control, customes
, departure and arrival entrance and exit will Correct your spelling
customs
customers
remaine
unchanged. Meanwhile, there will be a new cafe on the arrival side, Correct your spelling
remain
remained
also
an ATM and a car hire will be added there. Additionally
, on the departure side, check-in will be moved to the right to replace the cafe, while
bag drop will replace the check-in and the cafe will be relocated to the south of it.Submitted by sajjad.talebi2020 on
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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