The diagrams below show a site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate the design of an airport plan in two stages, the current version and the

post development

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format after the completion of development next year.

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, it can be seen that access to bag drop, ATM, sky train, shops and car hire will be provided next year

while

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walkway is going to be removed.

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, the area at the top will be expanded and a V shape space will be added to it next year to

accomodate

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accommodate

more planes.

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, The walkway will be

ommited

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omitted

, the square area will be enhanced by

addition

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of a

V shaped

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area on it providing

the

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apply

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room for 18 planes

instead

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of 8 to board passengers.

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, there will be access to

newly

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constructed sky train inside the expanded boarding hall

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there will be several airport markets available just outside the hall.

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, locations of Security, passport control,

customes

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customs

customers

, departure and arrival entrance and exit will

remaine

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remain

remained

unchanged. Meanwhile, there will be a new cafe on the arrival side,

also

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an ATM and a car hire will be added there.

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, on the departure side, check-in will be moved to the right to replace the cafe,

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bag drop will replace the check-in and the cafe will be relocated to the south of it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

214 words

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