Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email -Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn -Explain how your friend could learn this sport -Suggest that you both learn this sport together

Dear
Janete
Correct your spelling
Janet
, I’m sorry for just having a chance to write back to you, I was busy with my workload. I would like to answer your question about joining a new sports club.
Last
week, I came across a new
horse
riding exercise when I was walking home from the office. I know that you’re an adventurous person and care for an animal, so I think you will love to join
this
sport. They have many varieties of horses that you can pick. Looking at the information, beginners like us will be accompanied by a guide so you don’t have to worry about falling down from the
horse
. The guide who is a trained
horse
raider will teach us many tricks from basic to advanced for riding a
horse
. As you know I have loved horses since I was a kid, so it would be amazing if we could join
this
club together. We can spend more time to laugh together. I will send you the brochure so that you can take a look into it
further
. Let me know your thoughts about
this
, look forward to hearing from you. Love, Dian
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Grammar and Punctuation
Consider checking for minor grammatical errors and punctuation to improve the clarity and accuracy of your writing. For example, instead of 'I was busy with my workload' you could say 'I have been busy with my workload.'
Conclusion
While the email is well-structured, try to incorporate a concluding sentence that summarizes your main points to reinforce your recommendation.
Specific Examples
Use more specific details to make your examples even more relevant and persuasive. For instance, mention the name of the horse riding club or any unique features it offers.
Tone
The essay has a clear introduction and a friendly, engaging tone that is appropriate for an email to a friend.
Explanation
Good job on explaining how your friend could learn the sport by mentioning that a guide will accompany beginners.
Personal Touch
The suggestion to join the sport together adds a personal touch and strengthens your recommendation.

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