You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter. • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
Capitalize word
Madam
Iʼm
Jasmina and Iʼm
writing about a problem with a piece of equipment that I use for my job. I was working at home and then
suddenly did not work that I purchased from your company
. At first
it was working fine and Add a comma
first,
then
suddenly it overheated and stopped working. I thought you sold me a defective or substandard product.
I am one of the regular customers in your company
. I have purchased many equipments
from your Correct your spelling
equipment
company
and they have all been good
quality and have not broken down so far. I really need that Change preposition
of good
decide
right now because I'm working on an important experiment right now.
Replace the word
decision
Iʼm
very busy these days and I can't go to your Correct your spelling
I am
company
. I ask you to exchange the product I bought for another one. Your company
must be come
to my house. Because you know that Change to the active voice
come
have come
Iʼm
Correct your spelling
I am
very
busy person. Call me and I will give you my address.
Correct article usage
a very
Your
faithfully
JasminaCorrect the word
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to improve readability and logical structure.
task achievement
Specify the equipment more clearly to give better context. Also, provide more details on the impact on your work.
greeting and closing
You have included a greeting and closing, which adds to the formal tone of the letter.
suitable writing tone
The tone is generally suitable for a formal complaint letter, though could be slightly more polite and professional.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite